hi,
I see it's a kind of custom around here to open threads like this, so I'm fulfiling this duty... and gratifying my own conceitedness.
It was/is my first story written in English... of course I hope you enjoy it, but I'm also quite aware that my English is far from perfect. So, if you read the story and you like it, feel free to comment and point out (pliz) where I have made mistakes.
If you think it's stupid
you can point them out as well. Maybe I'd feel humilated and stop writing.
hipokrytes