The Start

HazieDaVampire · June 17, 2002, 17:05

Tromping Through the jungle, came the humans from the north, following the coast southwards they tromped on day dreaming as they followed each other thinking of times of fun and of loss. The Leader Trip, of his Tribe Apol. Brought his tribe out of a massive jungle into some fields of grass, and decided to stop. During the night around the camp fire the people sleeped

and dreamed. Trip dreamed of a tribe of a million faces, each one having its say in a land of not such hard times.

In the morning the people gatherd up their stuff, and walked east and around the edges of a Jungle with strait trees. The people had never seen a forest before, the trees seemed more friendly but the sounds of the wildlife sounded just as threatening as the jungle sounds. As the sun got low in the sky they set up camp near the sea, and the men built up tents for the first times in one hole month and the people rushed inside from the rain and gathered around the tribal set up. Trip sat at the back of the tent, to his left his Warrior Chief Uber and to his right his wise friend Tassadar.
"Welcome my friends" Said Trip. "Last night i had a dream, a dream where none of yous were unknown. Where you didn't have a struggle, where it wouldn't be a gamble to change our placement and you wouldn't have to worry about us not having any food by the end of the day in our new spot! We will have tents not made of animal skin, but of stone and they will be bigger than the tallest of Ubers Warroir Tribals." Trip proudly shouted with his chest sticking out. "I ask you now, where in this fine, flat land should we build this camp of stone?"

, The people mumbled amoung them selves

"Near the Sea!" Shouted a voice. "But we can see monsters in the water!"

shouted another. "But we can build things, and use Ubers Warriors can attack and kill them, and we will bring them in and feast on their meat!"

Said the first man. "But what about the Brilliant lands we have over here, we can use them to easily build things!".

The next day, the people were woken up early and given axes by the Warrior Tribals and chopped down the Trees, and some of them packed up their mobile camp. When the forest trees were completly removed the Tribals moved in and set up only half the tents, tonight they will sleep rough, because tomorrow they need to work hard and not waste time packing up the tents.

That morning the Tribals started collecting stones, shaping them, and stacking them up to create buildings. Some of Tassadars Munks began to create statues of Trip, and his meny advisors out of some nice smooth white rocks that the tribals had found. For weeks to come, the buildings began to raze from the ground up. When most of the mighty buildings had been complete the people Gathered around the statue of Apol, it represented everybody and anybody who lived under the symbol of the tribe. "Today we celibrate, no longer will we struggle on everyday to find a source of food. We will send out tribals to find the food and fetch it back for us, and we will have jobs to make our tribe great, we are now a city, this city shall be called 'Apolyton'

But little did this small tribe know that over the world plenty other men and women had the same idea, and little did they know how far and how big the tribe would get....

Kuciwalker · June 17, 2002, 17:47

Hazie, the is GREAT!

HazieDaVampire · June 17, 2002, 17:52

Thankyou, but in the writting of this i fear i might of missed a few movments and turns. Next time i'll try to do this after the chats finished, but it was a very long chat!

Apocalypse · June 17, 2002, 17:59

Good job, man

Kuciwalker · June 17, 2002, 18:01

Are we sure that Jrabbit doesn't have a DL? This was definately his level of quality.

JSeeds · June 17, 2002, 23:09

Nice job, keep it up!

Space05us · June 17, 2002, 23:12

Kingof the Apes · June 18, 2002, 01:03

GJ Hazie.

my new summer reading

beno · June 18, 2002, 03:43

Exxxx-cellent. keep on keeping us up to date.

jdjdjd · June 18, 2002, 10:20

Eli · June 18, 2002, 10:43

The early years :

HazieDaVampire · June 18, 2002, 11:22

i've just tagged a little bit onto the end and added a part i forgot to type in!

Eli · June 18, 2002, 11:25

No offense, but you should run a spellcheck on that.

HazieDaVampire · June 18, 2002, 11:27

dodgy keyboard, and some of yous might know the other reason for my dodgy spelling.

Vlad Antlerkov · June 18, 2002, 11:43

I like, I like.

Kingof the Apes · June 18, 2002, 11:50

Our palace looks a bit like a mine.

HazieDaVampire · June 18, 2002, 12:12

yes, all the tribals must of been more interested in their homes! lol

Nym · June 18, 2002, 12:37

Great!!!

Jon Shafer · June 18, 2002, 12:39

One thing I really dislike is how even in the modern age, it looks as though a bunch of buildings were just plopped down in the middle of a big pile o' dirt. City? I think not.

Timeline · June 18, 2002, 12:54

Yea, it's cause the city never fills up enough, they shoulda made more houses and such.

Ever see the Strategic Defense Initiative in the city screen? hehe

It's pretty lame.....

no this is not a threadjacking just increasing my post count so I can post costom avatars

btw: GREAT JOB ON THE STORY!!!!

Moral Hazard · June 18, 2002, 15:55

Great writing.

Hazie I don't know if you have Word or not but the best way aka fastest to do this is to write it in word first and then transfer.

Nikolai · June 18, 2002, 15:58

This is great!

A long time thereafter, in Apolywood, the next biographical movie is being made:
"Hazie, the vampire historian. A tale of blood, dirt and wellmade writings!"

Nubclear · June 18, 2002, 16:14

Great story and all, but....

Tassadars monks?!?

HazieDaVampire · June 18, 2002, 16:17

little dudes who follow you about learning things, like our tribe/civilizations research team!

PS - That shiny white stone is Marbel!

Sirotnikov · June 21, 2002, 11:48

hehe

HazieDaVampire · June 23, 2002, 17:33

3300 – By now the small band of tribal brothers who defended the Tribals had multiplied. Now two large groups of mad, insane, and strong men. Originally one of these scouted to the northwest, and found a French warrior group out on a scouting run! To the north of Apolyton the Tribe had built a new town called Banana HQ

.

Tromping through the jungle, two partys of workers and a gaurding warrior head towards the new town, pulling their way through the jungle

using long blades and axes to get the vegitation out of the way!
Uber got the Tribals in the city of Apolyton to start building a training camp in the city, to help train his warriors from young men, into killing machines. Now a smaller amount of warriors would be needed to defend the lands.

To the north west the scouting warriors were getting closer and closer to french lands. They sat down and sent out a few men to see what some French settlers and warriors were doing, and sent back 3 men to Apolyton, to see if we should attack or not.

I don't have time to finish, i'll post the rest later and edit this bit some to mak it better!

Kingof the Apes · June 23, 2002, 17:37

MrWhereItsAt · June 23, 2002, 17:38

Good work so far. I am very impressed with your (and everyone's) speed in these things.

HazieDaVampire · June 23, 2002, 17:39

god that turn chat was a shambles!

MrWhereItsAt · June 23, 2002, 17:43

I quote: "We've gotten much more organized.
We had nearly 2x as many turns as last time.
and in about half the time,"

All from Trip about 10 mins ago!