So, This is where the bards gather?
This is my first little adventure into this forum. I have already seen plenty of good, uplifting dialog and suggestions, so I thought I would say hi.
Some of you may know me, most probably not. I came to Apolyton specifically for the Civ 3 Demo Game originally. I wrote many an edition of it's newspaper as well while I was there. I have a history in news style writting, and have written actual news for a few websites and a guest article or two for some magazines.
I am currently in the PTWDG and am for the first time in my life, literally, writting an actual story, somewhat. I could use some feedback, and will perhaps move it over here as well when it is finished.
The story is based on the people in the DG, and my team within the DG itself, and is my first attempt at first person writting in my life, so I could definately use some criticism there as well. Here are the first 4 sections:
#1:
http://www.apolyton.net/forums/showt...threadid=84063
#2:
http://www.apolyton.net/forums/showt...threadid=84097
#3 & 4:
http://www.apolyton.net/forums/showt...threadid=84160
