Comments on Saving Private Ryan-A Chiron Story

[Bearcat]

This is where you can post your comments, complaints, or critiques on the story.

[Googlie]

Bearcat:

Great action - carries the reader right along breathlessly. What a heck of a fine yarn.

Only one irritant, and it may be how you compose (directly to the window rather than using word with copy and paste), but spellcheck is almost mandatory for fiction writers. Having to pause in the reading to decipher the word lessens the dramatic impact of the prose somewhat.

But as I say, great action that just sweeps us along.

Googlie


[This message has been edited by Googlie (edited June 29, 2000).]

[Bearcat]

All right I fixed the spelling. Just a bit of backstory. The Peackeepers are the Americans and the Usurpers are the Germans. The Drones are French, and some other factions like the Angels and Morganites are those factions conquered by the Usurpers. So Miller and co. are PKs
[This message has been edited by Bearcat (edited June 30, 2000).]