Seeking input once again.
Hi folks.
I stopped by here several months ago seeking input on my (at the time) new story. I am back for more critiquing now that it has grown considerably.
Some of you may be following along with it in the PTWDG forum, and if so, I thank you. For those who arent, this is a story about me in that Demo Game. There is a single unit named after me, and I am following it through the game, in a fashion.
Much too long to really post here properly, so here is a .doc of it:
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